-The Rain Falls But Never Smiles- ~*~Awarded by Sasha~*~
Shot straight through the heart with the bullet of deceit. The exit hole the size of New Jersey! Bleeding, bleeding bled Toss all your love away and let the sun shine on another fools parade. Throw...
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Pierces the emotions well. Neat write. Paul
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Throw all the softness straight into the sky. Let it land in the dump on bones of forgotten memories. Then he died while kissing a picture of her... She was laughing at him. I agree this pierces the...
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Wow... Powerfully Written! Nicely Done!
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Very powerful write Sane, definitely pulls on the heartstrings. You did a most excellent job on this. Much enjoyed.
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~ JD, this is such a powerfully emotive piece of poetry, my friend your words held me captivated from the start to that haunting closing so very deserving!!!! Sash xx
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